OK
Good:
-3D modelling was awesome, and I commend you for it.
-The sound was flipping crisp.
-the idea of a 'crazy dope armor suit' is good.
Bad:
-You pan and use the 'Matrix effect' way too much and give me the impression that you're just showing off your gfx rather than do a good TV show.
-The title scene at the end is lame.
-The animation was too 'jerky' and you should have added at least A BIT of transition between moving and still - no, wait. Nothing can be that still.
-Your 'crazy dope armour suit' should have been a 'cybernetic enhancement battle suit' - it sounds better.
-You should have a more original title than The Adventures of A.L.L.O.Y.
-You never explain what Alloy's powers are, you just show him beating people up. Baaad influence.